After reading the persuasive essay from Jerry Fensterman about

After reading the persuasive essay from Jerry Fensterman about

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After reading the persuasive essay from Jerry Fensterman about “I see why others choose to die” I was actually very well interested in the topic about physician assisted suicide. Not knowing that the Bush administration was part of the whole thing was interesting. I know that the writer did their research and was defiantly able to keep me interested enough to continue reading. Their grammar was very well used throughout the whole essay. I do not see very much that could be done for negative feedback to the writer. I would usually have some negative feedback but this time I do not for see any negative just positive feedback to the reader. In the
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Unformatted text preview: positive feedback I would let the writer know that his writing was very good. He did a good job finding information to keep the facts there and interesting. I would also let the writer know that their grammar was in good use. This essay was very persuasive to me since I did not know about Oregon and the whole physician assisted suicide. Making me persuaded to read on from a thesis through the introduction to the body is very hard but this author did make me read all the way through. I enjoyed reading what the author wrote....
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This note was uploaded on 03/28/2011 for the course COM 156 taught by Professor Hampton during the Winter '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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