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Unformatted text preview: paragraph until the other half of the argument was mentioned. The first three paragraphs are focused on the interpretation of Emerson’s text (which is very thorough), but not much was mentioned about the conformity in America. Contrarily, the more the paper progressed, the more satisfied the thesis became. Also, this paper could be dedicated to Emerson; there is minimal voice coming from the author herself. Just as a suggestion, it could have made more of a modern impact if ideas were brought into the argument relating to today’s world and hearing some of the author’s opinions. This did appear further in the text, but it would have been good to see it all along. But overall, this paper really speaks in a strong voice and clearly shows knowledge and organization....
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