CheckPoint Week 8 - Axia College Material Appendix G Peer...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? After reading the essay, the main topic in discussion is in reference to Traumatic Brain Injuries and how they are obtained in reference to military service. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of this essay is the information is provided by the author who is writing the experience based on first hand knowledge. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. The first paragraph does provide a solid base for the rest of the essay and did capture my interest to continue reading the essay to obtain better knowledge. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? In the fourth paragraph, the author switches topics without any type of transition from one topic to the other. While the information may be related to the main topic, the author needs to utilize a transition method when switching topics.
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This note was uploaded on 04/17/2011 for the course COM 150 taught by Professor Johannahvanatta during the Fall '08 term at University of Phoenix.

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