Unformatted text preview: the feedback as I prepare my final draft. I will reread and exam all areas that needed improvement and use my peers feedback as well as my instructor to work out the kinks. The feedback provided a clear view of mistakes and errors I missed. I chose to use the feedback and change the wording in my conclusion as not to imply parents as being lazy and also adding more details to heighten the research paper so that it is not vague and unclear in any parts....
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This note was uploaded on 04/19/2011 for the course COM 220 taught by Professor Unknown during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '08