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Unformatted text preview: Vu Nguyen Eng-003-15 7 March 2011 Paper 3 Word Count: When looking back at a past experience, one may analyze it through a different perspective. One may explain the bad experience under a representation of a low value thing or person. On the other hand, one will explain the good experience under a representation of a higher status thing, person, or even oneself. Can you make this less general and more specific about the situation(s) in the texts. Good! But say more specifically what this understanding will be. Again, be more specific. What subjects, what types of characteristics, and what is the reality experiences)? Nice explication here. Is Coetzee writing the tale of the ducks to directly relate to Youth? Or is that a connection youre making? helps? You can omit this. No one would disagree, I think. Again, Coetzee is not writing about Youth directly. This part works well. Same comment as above. Fix throughout. Is there any real difference between the Holland and the German ducks? Also, keep in mind that Coetzee is Dutch. Say more about this. Coetzee puts special emphasis on this word, and Im glad you are analyzing it here. What does kidnapping normal entail? Does anyone take John to London? Is there a ransom? Are the ducks deported or are they killed? Good! Say even more about this! Zero in on more details that show Coetzee, as South African, is rejected by Londoners or used by them. Agreement? Great detail, but remember that topic sentences should not summarize plot points but rather put forth your argument. Same comment as above about topic sentences. Can you link this to the handfuls of money described above? Plural? Failed? , In the speech He and his Man, Coetzees explicit explanation with the tale of ducks traveling to Lincolnshire helps us construct a deeper understanding and interpretation of Johns internal battles and miserable experiences in Youth .Can you make this less general and more specific about the situation(s) in the texts. Good! But say more specifically what this understanding will be. Again, be more specific. What subjects, what types of characteristics, and what is the reality experiences)? Nice explication here. Is Coetzee writing the tale of the ducks to directly relate to Youth? Or is that a connection youre making? helps? You can omit this. No one would disagree, I think. Again, Coetzee is not writing about Youth directly. This part works well. Same comment as above. Fix throughout. Is there any real difference between the Holland and the German ducks? Also, keep in mind that Coetzee is Dutch. Say more about this. Coetzee puts special emphasis on this word, and Im glad you are analyzing it here. What does kidnapping normal entail? Does anyone take John to London? Is there a ransom?...
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