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Unformatted text preview: NOT ENOUGH CONTEXT: Crooks feels like he is set apart from the others because of his race. Crooks had retired into the terrible protective dignity of the negro (79). BETTER: Crooks feels like he is set apart from the others because of his race. When Curleys wife insults Crooks, Candy, and Lennie, Lennie acts surprised, but Crooks responds by retiring into the terrible protective dignity of the negro (79). Avoid phrases like:-Here is a quote-This quote shows-This is an example of Instead, introduce your quote with: When _( explain the situation )_, then ( character) says, quote....
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This note was uploaded on 04/27/2011 for the course LIT 113 taught by Professor Howard during the Fall '09 term at Grand Valley State University.
- Fall '09