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JD Lester Carlos Ovando’s Paper 9-1-10 Is my focus not opinion based like the article but still fair to the author’s message? - I think that your summary was a bit too much opinion based. Though you did stay fair to the author’s opinion, you also expressed a lot of your own opinion in this summary. Does the third sentence show the author’s reasoning for his opinion on Obama? - Maybe put his name in the sentence because I don’t really understand who he is and who he is. It does kind of express the reasoning for his opinion on
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Unformatted text preview: Obama, however you could elaborate more. Do the points I make in my summary correspond with the main message that the author was trying to give up?- In some ways it does and in some ways it doesnt. You did make a lot of points that correspond with the authors main focus. In other parts of your paper you just talked about you own opinion which is not a good thing in a summary....
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