Unformatted text preview: over the paper and didn’t find one thing that seemed obvious to me. Do my ideas flow logically from one to another?- The paper could be structured a little better. I would pretty much switch my second and third paragraph. Talk about how lowering the age could increase the overall turnout first, then talk about what the lawmakers in California are debating....
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- Spring '08
- English, English-language films, JD Lester Stierra