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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Thesis Statement: The legalization of marijuana in the U.S. [In academic writing, this abbreviation should be used solely as an adjective; otherwise, write out United States] would drastically reduce crime in our [Use "we," "us," or "our" to mean yourself and coauthors, not general humanity (or yourself and the reader)] cities and form a more productive society through its positive uses. The war on drugs deals with every level of society. Every year, the U.S. government spends large amounts of money to control drug use and to enforce laws enacted to protect society from the dangers of certain drugs. Some argue that the fight against drugs is not needed and that society has already lost the war on drugs and the only [Run-on sentence: place a comma before "and"] way to remedy the problem to end most of the fighting altogether is by
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