Unformatted text preview: I will try my best to incorporate all the feedback by making such changes and observations on the outside views provided through both peer review and CWE. Not to mention, the instructor as well. How does this feedback improve your expository essay? This type of essay will most definitely improve my essay in a way that promises more clarity. All eyes of readers are different, but this can identify more clarity for my potential audience. Being all ears for suggestions merits the communication skills and where to dare travel What feedback did you choose not to include? Possibly the overall suggestive word usage that comes from CWE. I think that the CWE sometimes generalizes how an essay should be written, however I believe that the essay have a better effect in the word usage it already has. I will consider some of the corrections and take them for good use....
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This note was uploaded on 05/10/2011 for the course BUS 210 taught by Professor Scottrought during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '08