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Peer Critique Memo2 - P eer C ritique Memo (Stephen McDades...

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Peer Critique Memo (Stephen McDade’s Essay) by Cameron Short The overall question and purpose of the essay was answered within the essay. The essay discussed elements that Christian J. Matuschek used in his work “Homeland Security.” The elements included the types of characters the artist used, the lighting and shading of the picture, the chosen colors, and the overall design of the picture. These general ideas are good but the organization is confusing. Some of the paragraphs in the actual essay are not established in the introduction paragraph of the essay. The content that is written about is good but there could be more examples to make the essay longer and to make the essay stronger altogether. The essay is written well for a college audience. The fundamentals of the essay are well executed but the organization of the essay and the addition of content could make the essay much stronger. The style of writing is different for every person and it seems as though the
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This note was uploaded on 05/18/2011 for the course ENGLISH 101 taught by Professor Walker during the Spring '11 term at Columbia SC.

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Peer Critique Memo2 - P eer C ritique Memo (Stephen McDades...

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