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Unformatted text preview: that there were some grammar and punctuation errors to correct. I will incorporate all of this feedback into my paper by changing the “you” and “yours” within my papers to “individual” and “individuals” I will fix any and all sentences that are unclear or don’t flow right. Furthermore, I will add more details where needed and fix my grammar and punctuation. This feedback has improved my expeditionary essay because it has allowed me to not only make it better but also fix the problems I hadn’t seen. I will use all the feedback provided to me because it was all useful and helpful. I didn’t find any feedback to be incorrect or over the top....
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course COM 150 taught by Professor Johannahvanatta during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '08