COM150 peer review by clasmate

COM150 peer review by clasmate - it Should add more details...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? About tattoos What is the greatest strength of this essay? How to choose the right place to receive a tattoo. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Yes the introduction grabs my interest making me want to read on. It explains how tattoos have been around for years and how they were used as identification on some prisoners and as a part of some heritage. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? For example, if you like a lot of pink and high fashion you may not want to get a black and white tattoo of barbed wire going down your arm Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. because a tattoo looks great on a friend does not mean it will look as good on you or that you will be satisfied with
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Unformatted text preview: it. Should add more details about making the decision before getting a tattoo and being sure of what you want. Where is the writing unclear or vague? for a job that will not allow tattoos What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? a tattoo should be personal , meaningful, and it should relate your individual sense of style. What other comments might you provide for the author? To add more detail about tattoo removal. Not all removal processes or expensive and there is more than one removal process. *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. This was the peer review by my classmate I wasn’t sure if I was supposed to have another peer do a review or if this one is sufficient....
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course COM 150 taught by Professor Johannahvanatta during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.

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