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Unformatted text preview: it. Should add more details about making the decision before getting a tattoo and being sure of what you want. Where is the writing unclear or vague? for a job that will not allow tattoos What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? a tattoo should be personal , meaningful, and it should relate your individual sense of style. What other comments might you provide for the author? To add more detail about tattoo removal. Not all removal processes or expensive and there is more than one removal process. *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. This was the peer review by my classmate I wasn’t sure if I was supposed to have another peer do a review or if this one is sufficient....
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course COM 150 taught by Professor Johannahvanatta during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '08