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Week 7Assignment COM220 - Axia College Material Appendix G...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? The main point of this paper is childhood obesity. What is the greatest strength of this paper? The greatest strength of this essay is the section where the author discusses and supports how children learn the habits from their parents. And how few children actually eat healthy. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? I feel that the paper was well written and that it does flow pretty well I did not see any specific things that didn’t fit all and all the information did back up the main point. Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. Yes the author has sufficiently addressed counter arguments. The author states that parents blame childhood obesity on advertisers and food companies. The authors counter argument to this is quoting “Advertising is not as harmful to youth as people often make it out to be” (Moerdyk, 2008 p 1).
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