CRT205 week 8 CHECKPOINT PEER REVIEW

CRT205 week 8 CHECKPOINT PEER REVIEW - Running head PEER...

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Running head: PEER REVIEW 1 Peer review Kelli Lorenc COM/150 March 16, 2011 Nanda Twari
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PEER REVIEW 2 Peer review
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PEER REVIEW 3 Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? Tattoos and body piercings What is the greatest strength of this essay? the greatest strength of this essay is that the author has a lot of facts thru out it and has some knowledge base and if the author just cleaned up some of the sentence and made it flow better it would be amazing writing. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. I Can’t say if the introduction Grabs my attention or not because the introduction has not been included in this paper. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The author talks about the laser removal for tattoos but doesn’t go into depth I think it needs more depth or to be taken out and the author should just discuses the tattoo removal creams.
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course CRT 205 taught by Professor N/a during the Spring '09 term at University of Phoenix.

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CRT205 week 8 CHECKPOINT PEER REVIEW - Running head PEER...

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