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Unformatted text preview: seem as though there are only male mangers and that can be extremely offensive to those of us women who work hard to get into a management position; so you could have rephrased it as “Mangers and their spouses”. Finally, you “recommended that any MAN…” you implied once again that only men want to move up and that women shouldn’t prepare for their future with in management. A way you could have rephrased that is “anyone looking to advance in the business world” or “any man or women. ..” just by changing the wording a little bit as you see above can save a lot of hassle and miscommunication. When talking about spouses it’s not a good idea to specified husband or wives because you don’t want to categorize people in that way. So I hope these ideas helped because when communicating in an on-line forum others don’t know you can’t see you so your word need to take into account every individual that you may or may not come across....
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course GEN 105 taught by Professor Adams during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '08