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Kelli Lorenc Ms. Vance English 98-1108 24 February 2010 Cause or Effect Paragraph chevro-legs The Effects of Cars Breaking Down are as follows. First transporting my children to school by seven am know consits of me walk them to school there which takes twice as much time,in effect my son must use his inhaler more often each day. secondly, trying to get to school myself on three seprate buses by eight am has become extremely difficult and has caused me to drop several of the classes I was taking on campus, further more it has effected my plans for graduation I will have to wait another year; while doubling my course load. Finally, it makes running errands much more difficult; like trying to pay my cable bill which is across town and there isnt a bus that gose directly by it, and when I go grocershopping I have to walk to the store and push my shopping cart
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Unformatted text preview: back home these two errends take me a whole day, when previously I would have only spent an hour doing them. Now that taking the bus and walking are my main means of transportation. So finding a new car has become a number one priority for me. Suggested Outline: Topic (Generic, not narrative, take yourself out of it) Ex. The Effects of Cars Breaking Down (are….list three things) 1) transporting children to and from school (three things under that, explain what happens or can happen) 2) it makes running errands much more difficult (three errands which are made difficult; store, etc., be specific and detailed, ex. Distance) 3) Issues with school (effected because of a car breaking down) You have really written a cause and effect paper at the same time. It is in my opinion to be late with your paper then do it wrong. These are just my suggestions....
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