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Unformatted text preview: back home these two errends take me a whole day, when previously I would have only spent an hour doing them. Now that taking the bus and walking are my main means of transportation. So finding a new car has become a number one priority for me. Suggested Outline: Topic (Generic, not narrative, take yourself out of it) Ex. The Effects of Cars Breaking Down (are….list three things) 1) transporting children to and from school (three things under that, explain what happens or can happen) 2) it makes running errands much more difficult (three errands which are made difficult; store, etc., be specific and detailed, ex. Distance) 3) Issues with school (effected because of a car breaking down) You have really written a cause and effect paper at the same time. It is in my opinion to be late with your paper then do it wrong. These are just my suggestions....
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- Spring '11
- English, Automobile, Walking, shopping cart, Kelli Lorenc, Kelli Lorenc Ms.