peer review contrast for katrina robinson

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-1Writer's Name Katrina Robinson Reviewer's Name Kelli Lorenc <!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]--> <!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]--> 1) Does the beginning of the paragraph grab you and make you want to keep reading? If so, how does it do this? If not, what could the writer do to make the opening more compelling? Write out the topic sentence. Does the topic sentence clearly state both subjects of the contrast? What are they? Circle the part that gives the topics or subjects. Underline the part that gives the attitude or opinion. Where is the topic sentence located? Is this location effective? No the beginning of the paragraph did not grab my attention. I really didn’t undersrand the topic sentence and how it is associated with the paragraph it didnt make much sense to me. I belive the topic setence is the first sentence. 2) What is the overall feel of the paragraph? Does the writer show and clear preference for one subject over the other? Is so, which one? How can you tell? I liked the overall feel of the paragraph. I did read anything that seemed like the writer showed a cleaer prefrence over one subject than the other they were all extremely clear. 3) Does the writer use block method or point-by-point method? If the writer uses point-by- point method, is he or she completely handling subject A for each point before moving to subject B, or has he or she broken it down to the details (overly divided it)? The writer uses the point by point method. The writer did completely handel the
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course ENG 98 taught by Professor W during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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