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Peer Review Writer's Name Kelli Lorenc Reviewer's Name David Galloway 1) What type of hook does this essay begin with? Write the hook here. Is it effective? Yes. Does it make you want to keep reading to find out what the writer is talking about? What does the writer have in the middle of the introductory paragraph: background material, preview, other information? Does the writer have a clearly stated thesis statement? What is the specific topic of the essay? What to know about getting your first tattoo. Does the writer make this clear in the thesis statement? What is the attitude of the essay? Write the thesis statement here. Is the thesis statement tightly written, or could the writer say the same thing in fewer words? If so, how? As tattoos get more and more popular, I get a lot of questions about mine. The first tattoo can be scary. Yes I was slightly interested. The writer speaks of her own tattoo experience. 2) What is the first support? Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence? Which mode of rhetoric (tool or writing) is prevalent in this paragraph? Are there at least three major supports for the topic sentence? Does each of them have at least two details? Are the details vivid and specific? Are there any sentences or bits of information that are off-topic? The painful process of tattoo removal involves a process of expensive laser burning or painful
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This note was uploaded on 05/20/2011 for the course ENG 98 taught by Professor W during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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