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Search Essay Peer Review Writer's Name __ Kelli Lorenc Reviewer's Name __Nick Valentine Peer Review 1) What type of hook does this essay begin with? Write the hook here. Is it effective? Does it make you want to keep reading to find out what the writer is talking about? What does the writer have in the middle of the introductory paragraph: background material, preview, other information? Does the writer use the thesis statement given for the assignment ? Kelli the intro is good, you need a good hook to interest the reader. You have some background material. You have the required thesis statement, but in the wrong place. 2) What is the first support? The writer should be discussing something either positive or negative about TV. Does this support seem sufficiently focused, or is it too broad to handle in only one paragraph? If it is too broad, suggest a sharper focus that the writer could concentrate on. Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence? Write the topic sentence here. Which mode of rhetoric (tool of writing) is prevalent in this paragraph? Are there at least three major supports for the topic sentence? Does each of them have at least two details? Are the details vivid and specific? Are there any sentences or bits of information that are off-topic? The young child needs to see and hear as they learn. Yes, but it is in the intro. pull that into the first support paragraph. You have at least three of four supports details and an authority which is good you
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