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Paragraph 1 I choose to review paragraphs one and four, which were considerably different. Paragraph one was very confusing to read . The writer of the paragraph kept repeating the word will in the sentences. It also seemed like they jumped from one idea to another and then back again with no true connection to any idea. The writer doesn’t use good sentence variety. These errors made me lose interest in the paragraph rather quickly. Paragraph four was written better. The paragraph seemed to have a good rhythm; the information seemed to run together smoothly. Also the information the writer was giving was very clear and easy to understand. This paragraph went into detail about how credit scores are calculated. This information was very helpful and interesting to know. Paragraph four was because it was written better, it kept my interest, and I could understand the information it was giving. Paragraph 2
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This note was uploaded on 05/24/2011 for the course CS 310 taught by Professor Jones during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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