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Unformatted text preview: o The point I want to make is that o Common problem: forms of verb to be Kill 3: adverbial intensifiers o Very, really, quite o Add emotional, nebulous appeals, not quantified arguments Kill 4: let words work o A period of 3 months should be 3 months o Past experience should be experience o At present should be now Kill 5: love verbs, not nouns...
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- Fall '06