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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. [Make sure paragraph indentation is five to seven spaces or one tab stop] United States-Centric Views Comparison Loretta Campbell Cultural Diversity Elizabeth Sherrell-Smith Loretta Campbell 03/13/2011
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[Incorrect indentation] Family Member Table Christian Americans Both Groups Muslim and Arab Americans Not oppressive to women Women who [Check punctuation: If the following phrase is nonrestrictive (the sentence would still make sense without it) insert comma before "who"] go to work Feminist Flexible moral values Political environment open to both sexes Moderate political values Immodest dress Conservative political values Socially inclusive Socially compliant Good neighbors Family oriented Well [This is a thought-pause word in speech or folksy writing but is wordy and inappropriate in academic or business communication] educated Secular content in education Educated Devout Law abiding [Assuming the previous two words function as an adjective, they should be spelled as a single hyphenated word] Religion part of government Moderate moral values Oppressive to women Women as homemakers Religious content in education Male-dominated political environment Sexist Strict moral values Governed by the Qur’an Modest dressed Violent Socially exclusionary Socially oppressed Loretta Campbell 03/13/2011
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Peaceable Undereducated My [Avoid use of the first person (I, me, my) in academic writing unless writing about a personal experience. Check first person use with your instructor. ] Table Christian Americans Both Groups Muslim and Arab
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This note was uploaded on 05/29/2011 for the course POS 110 taught by Professor Britt,j during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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