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Revision Paragraph for Unit Essay 1

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Kelvin S. Rubio 12/20/10 Composition 1, Section 075 Revision Paragraph, Unit Essay 1 Professor Petillo Revision Paragraph for Unit Essay 1 For my Unit one essay “Black vs. White: The Perfect Body” I had to completely rewrite the
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Unformatted text preview: essay. I removed all generalizations. I included a new thesis. I added more detail revolving around media. Lastly I rearranged several lines so that they remain coherent....
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