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Unformatted text preview: I also remove sentences that was too preachy in my conclusion. I also included two citations for the sections revolving the Columbine Massacre, and the Virginia Tech Massacre. Lastly I corrected grammatical errors....
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This note was uploaded on 05/30/2011 for the course WRT 101 taught by Professor Shegriff during the Spring '08 term at Bergen Community College.
- Spring '08
- Thesis Statements