Unformatted text preview: Paragraph 3. Such as including mention of his fame and talent, and how it saved him from death. I also removed some sections of my paragraph because they were either weak or irrelevant. I also fixed my grammatical errors and included Szpilman’s full name, and also corrected the spelling of his name....
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- Spring '08
- Władysław Szpilman, Revision Paragraph, Kelvin S. Rubio