Revison Paragraph to Unit Essay 2

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Kelvin S. Rubio 12/20/10 Composition 1, Section 075 Revision Paragraph, Unit Essay 2 Professor Petillo Revision Paragraph to Unit Essay 2 In my Unit Essay 2 “Wladyslaw Szpilman: The Jewish Pianist that Survived the Holocaust” I changed one of my reasons for Szpilman’s survival of him being lucky, to being famous, talented, and was very fortunate. Because of this I had to make most of my changes in
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Unformatted text preview: Paragraph 3. Such as including mention of his fame and talent, and how it saved him from death. I also removed some sections of my paragraph because they were either weak or irrelevant. I also fixed my grammatical errors and included Szpilman’s full name, and also corrected the spelling of his name....
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