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Unformatted text preview: I know your throat was not up to par but it still got the point across. By reading our papers out loud we could see where they were stumbling which indicated that the wording was weird. From my last paper I know my use of grammar is a huge improvement. Throughout the course of this unit the most helpful activity for me was probably reading all of the different My Turn essays. This was pretty much the bases for our entire paper. There were many different examples so it was not hard to find an essay that fit your style. I hope Ms. Bobbitt will notice how strong my introduction and conclusion are. Regards, Beau Backhaus...
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- Spring '09