Subject line: Talent Reallocation
This e-mail is in reference to the two employees who are going to be terminated Friday. We have
determined that they are Nicole Stone and Lorenzo Torres. As we discussed yesterday, their
performances are not on par with those of other employees in the accounting department;
interventions with these employees have not been successful in helping them improve their
performance. Let’s plan to meet with them individually in the conference room between 3:00 and
Responses to questions 1 and 2.
In my opinion the subject line is totally wrong for this type of email.
The email is
titled “Talent Reallocation”, by this title it would mean that these two employees
listed in the email would be moved to different departments instead of terminated.
Since both of these two people, Tom and Andrea, both seem to be in a
management position this is mail is correct.
They would be speaking on a first
name terms since they most likely work together on a day to day basis.
not discuss anyone else in this email and they say that they are going to talk to
these people alone.
Rewrite e-mail if necessary
Subject line: doc u wanted
Attached to this e-mail is the doc you wanted with the info on that lake project. I hope everything
in it is str8 and the way U want it!!!!
BTW, did you see Last Comic Standing last night? I was totally ROFL at the bald dude!! :-}
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