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Unformatted text preview: purpose come across throughout the story? 4. Does the story move along from the beginning to the end? What parts are not needed and bog the story down? 5. What scenes need more description? More detail? What kind of detail? Does the writer appeal to the senses? Where can more appeal to the senses be added? 6. Is there dialogue to convey immediacy and heighten tension? Where can dialogue be included? Where is there too much dialogue? 7. Could anecdotes be incorporated throughout this essay? (Anecdotes are stories that add to the overall essay)....
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- Winter '11