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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * Review of Mary Bradleys’ Essay By Melanie Dodson What is the main point of this essay? How Immigration laws affect individuals wanting to immigrate to the United States. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of Mary’s essay is the passion I can feel from her on this subject through her words. I can tell she did her research on immigration laws. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Mary has some great ideas on what the introduction should contain. There needs to be some revision though. The introduction does not grab my interest and is too vague. The first sentence, “Today immigration is in the news”, does not tell me anything about what Mary wants to say about immigration laws. It does not relay the main concepts of the topic or give background information. Also, there needs to be coherence and unity to bring all
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This note was uploaded on 06/14/2011 for the course IT 210 taught by Professor Josephpillera during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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