Unformatted text preview: I dont think there is a problem with white space because the major details are noticeable. There is not a consistency in the fonts; they are all different types of fonts throughout the ad. The paragraph is hard to read because the sentences are made in fragments. If the editor could change the fragments to sentences, and make the paragraph shorter, the ad could be more affective the audience. Overall I do think it is a good advertisement....
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- Fall '10
- Cruise ship, Holland America Line, Allison Morrow