week2 - You could say: "I will earn more money...

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I wrote these 5 sentences for a assignment and would like some feeback on them as to what I may need to work on. 1.Our education plays (simple present tense) a major role in our future finances. 2.My financial planning class opened (simple past tense) my eyes to my unnecessary expenses. 3.Financial planning is (present tense) a class all students can benefit from. 4.I have (present perfect tense) discussed my finances with my advisor. 5.I plan (future) on earning more money with my college degree .
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COM/155 - Ms. Sue , Friday, November 19, 2010 at 9:33pm They're all right -- except # 5. The verb "plan" is in the present tense.
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Unformatted text preview: You could say: "I will earn more money after I earn my college degree." COM/155 - Writeacher , Friday, November 19, 2010 at 9:33pm 1. looks good 2. looks good 3. looks good; but are you supposed to use 5 different tenses during this assignment? 4. the verb = have discussed (present perfect tense) ["discussed" is the main part of the verb; "have" is the auxiliary verb] 5. Future tense is formed with "will" or "shall" or one of their negatives. How can you rewrite this to make it a true future? COM/155 - Brandy , Friday, November 19, 2010 at 9:51pm Thanks for you help!!!...
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