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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? Illegal Immigration and Immigration Reform What is the greatest strength of this paper? Immigration reform and how it is a law that America enforces. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? I thought this paper was written really well. All parts of the paper flowed and the author kept all the information in order so as a reader you could understand where they were going with it. Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. Yes. There are many parts in this paper that shows the arguments of Illegal Immigration and how it affects families and why. It goes into detail about the federal govt. and their obligation to reform immigration. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I think it is good the way it is. This paper has all the
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Unformatted text preview: information needed and also shows all of the backup where the information was found and the facts needed. I really enjoyed reading this paper. Where is the writing unclear or vague? The writing throughout the entire paper was very clear and I had a good understanding throughout the paper. All punctuation was correct and it was put together nicely. com220r6 What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? The statements made at the beginning of the paper. The Thesis and the Introduction were really good. What other comments can you provide for the author? I enjoyed this paper. I think they did a great job in researching what they needed. Also the paper kept my attention the whole time reading. Great Job!!! *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r6...
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This note was uploaded on 06/30/2011 for the course COMMUNICAT com220 taught by Professor Klump during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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