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Unformatted text preview: information needed and also shows all of the backup where the information was found and the facts needed. I really enjoyed reading this paper. Where is the writing unclear or vague? The writing throughout the entire paper was very clear and I had a good understanding throughout the paper. All punctuation was correct and it was put together nicely. com220r6 What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? The statements made at the beginning of the paper. The Thesis and the Introduction were really good. What other comments can you provide for the author? I enjoyed this paper. I think they did a great job in researching what they needed. Also the paper kept my attention the whole time reading. Great Job!!! *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r6...
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- Spring '11
- Writing, Immigration to the United States, Illegal immigration to the United States, immigration reform