Appendix G Com 150 - Axia College Material Appendix G Peer...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point is to legalize the sale of marijuana and hemp in the United States of America. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of the essay is that the amount of money that can be revenue from the sale of either hemp or marijuana. Not only the sales but also the medical problems it can help with. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Yes, the introduction grabs my attention because it makes me wonder why the writer wants to or feels that the narcotic should be legalized and why he/she feels this way. Although I feel that it would be a great thing to do; I feel that their needs to be a preventable measure or controlled atmosphere for this type of treatment to be done in. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? Well the first thing I feel that doesn’t belong is speaking of a battle
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