Ebonie Grady- Give Unselfishly

Ebonie Grady- Give Unselfishly - Peer Response Checklist...

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Peer Response Checklist Directions: Use the checklist below for your peer reviews. Please copy and paste the paper you are reviewing below the checklist. Keep in mind that this assignment is graded and that your grade will be determined by how detailed your review is. A best practice is to provide a detailed explanation for each answer--approximately a paragraph. Not required, but strongly suggested: Use Track Changes to add your comments and suggestions to the appropriate areas in the paper. 1. Writer's Name: Ebonie Grady 2. What is the type and purpose of this paper? This was a persuasive essay regarding how an event can change many people’s life and how a small help or donation can help them get back on track. 2. What is the thesis of this paper? Does it reflect the topic and purpose of the paper? The intention of this writer was to motivate people who can help others. Yes, it does reflect the topic and purpose of the paper. As I read the first paragraph I somehow asked my self if I’ve ever seen someone in need and passed him or her with no intention in helping him or her? 3. What is the biggest problem area of the paper? (Organization, development of ideas, grammar, punctuation, etc.) Explain your answer. I found everything very well organized. Well done. 4. What is the biggest strength of the paper? Explain your answer. I like so many examples and numbers, which are provided, to better understand the point of the essay. 5. What material doesn't seem to fit the main point or the audience? Are all of the topic sentences points of the thesis? Are all of the support sentences facts, examples, reasons, etc. to explain the topic sentence? If not, which need revision? I think everything fit just fine. All of the topic sentences are following the thesis.
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This note was uploaded on 06/24/2011 for the course COMP 100 taught by Professor Dfgdegg during the Spring '08 term at DeVry Chicago O'Hare.

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Ebonie Grady- Give Unselfishly - Peer Response Checklist...

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