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The paragraphs I choose were number one that about wills and paragraph five that discusses debt. I think paragraph one was more effective than paragraph five . Paragraph number one used many short sentences and had information we really didn’t need to know, but included reasons why a will is important. The first paragraph gave examples of what could happen if you don’t have a will.
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Unformatted text preview: Though not as effective, paragraph five had a better flow than paragraph one. Paragraph five talked about how hard managing debt is but gave no ways to avoid debt. Both paragraphs could use better sentence variety, which would have given them better flow....
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This note was uploaded on 07/14/2011 for the course COM 155 taught by Professor Williams during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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