Appendix G - Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point is that gas prices are affected by war and the oil industry (problems with machinery, etc.). What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of this essay is that it is well organized. Information is not scattered throughout different paragraphs. Each paragraph flows into the next fairly well. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Yes. The first sentence is a question that grabs attention and makes you think. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? Saying "Instead of complaining" in paragraph 5 does not seem to be a good phrase. Maybe try using a thesaurus tool to find a different phrase to use that wouldn't sound as negative. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer.
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