1031.bb1_TKedited - IvyReview

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1031 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 2.2 Comments: Purpose of essay: Don’t use “My view on this issue…. .is completely true,” use a more assertive thesis like “People are willing to limit their personal interests for success.” Good examples Organization: Make sure you slightly elaborate on all examples in the introduction Good conclusion Use different transitions (furthermore, also, etc.) Use of sentences
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