1093.online7_TKedited

1093.online7_TKedited - Introduction two examples...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1093 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __1__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 1.5 Comments: Purpose of essay: No concrete examples (use examples from literature, history, or current events) Organization: Has an introduction and conclusion (conclusion kind of weak), but no supporting examples
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Unformatted text preview: Introduction two examples conclusion Use of sentences Good, varied sentence structures Choice of words Use more sophisticated vocabulary Dont use contractions (isnt, dont, etc) Dont use you Grammar & Usage Good grammar //home/vdimitrov/5892/28757feba95dcb86015764d75d46eeb4fba0402c.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Overall impressions Too short, try to make it two pages Weak example, use two examples from literature, history, or current events //home/vdimitrov/5892/28757feba95dcb86015764d75d46eeb4fba0402c.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.

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