1143.online7_TKedited

1143.online7_TKedited - Good, varied sentence structures...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1143 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __1__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 1.5 Comments: Purpose of essay: No concrete examples (use examples from literature, history, or current events) Organization: Has an okay overall idea of organization (introduction, examples, conclusion) Weak examples, not enough elaboration No transitions (use transitions between examples) Use of sentences
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Unformatted text preview: Good, varied sentence structures Some unnecessary words in sentences (When someone has designer clothing or handbags, most of the time, they are rich people Most people with designer clothing or handbags are rich people.) Dont start a sentence with but Choice of words //home/vdimitrov/5850/2c90975037c50ef3f9a7f791d6ab884942d59758.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Use more sophisticated vocabulary Dont use contractions (isnt, dont, etc) Dont use you Grammar & Usage Good grammar, just watch out for run-on sentences Overall impressions Too short, try to make it two pages Weak examples, use two examples from literature, history, or current events //home/vdimitrov/5850/2c90975037c50ef3f9a7f791d6ab884942d59758.docx 6/10/11...
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