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Unformatted text preview: Good, varied sentence structures Some unnecessary words in sentences (When someone has designer clothing or handbags, most of the time, they are rich people Most people with designer clothing or handbags are rich people.) Dont start a sentence with but Choice of words //home/vdimitrov/5850/2c90975037c50ef3f9a7f791d6ab884942d59758.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Use more sophisticated vocabulary Dont use contractions (isnt, dont, etc) Dont use you Grammar & Usage Good grammar, just watch out for run-on sentences Overall impressions Too short, try to make it two pages Weak examples, use two examples from literature, history, or current events //home/vdimitrov/5850/2c90975037c50ef3f9a7f791d6ab884942d59758.docx 6/10/11...
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