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Unformatted text preview: • Good, varied sentence structures • Some unnecessary words in sentences (When someone has designer clothing or handbags, most of the time, they are rich people Most people with designer clothing or handbags are rich people.) • Don’t start a sentence with ‘but’ Choice of words //home/vdimitrov/5850/2c90975037c50ef3f9a7f791d6ab884942d59758.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 • Use more sophisticated vocabulary • Don’t use contractions (“isn’t,” “don’t,” etc) • Don’t use “you” Grammar & Usage • Good grammar, just watch out for run-on sentences Overall impressions • Too short, try to make it two pages • Weak examples, use two examples from literature, history, or current events //home/vdimitrov/5850/2c90975037c50ef3f9a7f791d6ab884942d59758.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.
- Spring '11