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1174.online7_TKedited - Use of sentences Good, varied...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1174 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 3.5 Comments: Purpose of essay: Good thesis! Good glimpse and elaboration of examples in introduction Strong connection in the body paragraphs to thesis Organization: Great organization (introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion) Use transitions between body paragraphs
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Unformatted text preview: Use of sentences Good, varied sentence structures Choice of words Fluent, paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Some misused commas Throughout the book To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought of by most people in his town, to be some kind of monster because he does not come out of his house. Throughout To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought to be a monster by some people in his town, because he does not come out of his house. Overall impressions Great purpose and organization Minor errors in grammar and sentence structure, use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11...
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