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Unformatted text preview: Use of sentences • Good, varied sentence structures Choice of words • Fluent, paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 • Some misused commas –“Throughout the book To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought of by most people in his town, to be some kind of monster because he does not come out of his house.” “Throughout To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought to be a monster by some people in his town, because he does not come out of his house.” Overall impressions • Great purpose and organization • Minor errors in grammar and sentence structure, use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11...
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- Spring '11
- Writing, body paragraphs, Grammar & Usage