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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1174 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 3.5 Comments: Purpose of essay: Good thesis! Good glimpse and elaboration of examples in introduction Strong connection in the body paragraphs to thesis Organization: Great organization (introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion) Use transitions between body paragraphs
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Unformatted text preview: Use of sentences • Good, varied sentence structures Choice of words • Fluent, paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 • Some misused commas –“Throughout the book To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought of by most people in his town, to be some kind of monster because he does not come out of his house.” “Throughout To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought to be a monster by some people in his town, because he does not come out of his house.” Overall impressions • Great purpose and organization • Minor errors in grammar and sentence structure, use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11...
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