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Unformatted text preview: Use of sentences Good, varied sentence structures Choice of words Fluent, paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Some misused commas Throughout the book To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought of by most people in his town, to be some kind of monster because he does not come out of his house. Throughout To Kill a Mockingbird , he is thought to be a monster by some people in his town, because he does not come out of his house. Overall impressions Great purpose and organization Minor errors in grammar and sentence structure, use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5959/9dbf58cea49b1817123a8764bedd40e3227e123f.docx 6/10/11...
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