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1179.online7_TKedited - examples -Use transitions between...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1179 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 2.3 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Okay thesis and expansion of thesis ,but lack of concrete examples makes the essay hard to follow—use examples from literature, history, or current events Organization: - Has an idea of organization (introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion), but lacking
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Unformatted text preview: examples -Use transitions between body paragraphs Use of sentences-Good, varied sentence structures-Some errors in sentence structure (Also, what happened to the persondurin particular that time period can affect how they see other people.) Choice of words -Paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5835/53b6e4d34770907e168e84e9258209db079d72ba.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Subject v. verb agreement (Emotions such as being excited or being sad makes their image seem strange. Emotions such as being excited or sad make their image seem strange.) Overall impressions Okay purpose but needs examples Minor errors in grammar and sentence structure, use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5835/53b6e4d34770907e168e84e9258209db079d72ba.docx 6/10/11...
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