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Unformatted text preview: examples -Use transitions between body paragraphs Use of sentences-Good, varied sentence structures-Some errors in sentence structure (Also, what happened to the persondurin particular that time period can affect how they see other people.) Choice of words -Paper flows well Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5835/53b6e4d34770907e168e84e9258209db079d72ba.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Subject v. verb agreement (Emotions such as being excited or being sad makes their image seem strange. Emotions such as being excited or sad make their image seem strange.) Overall impressions Okay purpose but needs examples Minor errors in grammar and sentence structure, use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5835/53b6e4d34770907e168e84e9258209db079d72ba.docx 6/10/11...
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