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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1213 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 2.3 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Good thesis and strong examples Organization: - Make sure you introduce examples in the introduction - Use transitions between body paragraphs
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Unformatted text preview: Use of sentences-Good, varied sentence structures-Some errors in sentence structure (Also, what happened to the persondurin particular that time period can affect how they see other people.) Choice of words -Paper flows well Grammar & Usage-Try not to use contractions in your essay Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5825/5ec475ddc6e2b4226a1aa0a1bad6144685ba74ce.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Good thesis and supporting examples, just mention the examples in your introduction and conclusion Use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5825/5ec475ddc6e2b4226a1aa0a1bad6144685ba74ce.docx 6/10/11...
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