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Unformatted text preview: Use of sentences-Good, varied sentence structures-Some errors in sentence structure (Also, what happened to the persondurin particular that time period can affect how they see other people.) Choice of words -Paper flows well Grammar & Usage-Try not to use contractions in your essay Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5825/5ec475ddc6e2b4226a1aa0a1bad6144685ba74ce.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Good thesis and supporting examples, just mention the examples in your introduction and conclusion Use transitions! //home/vdimitrov/5825/5ec475ddc6e2b4226a1aa0a1bad6144685ba74ce.docx 6/10/11...
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- Spring '11