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Unformatted text preview: -Mainly simple sentences, try more complex sentences/combining sentences Choice of words -Dont use thing in essays-No contractions in essays Grammar & Usage-Many errors in subject-verb agreement and sentence structure //home/vdimitrov/5876/f1b2fb5dc62178d55fae667bf6762ed0aa43f5ee.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Thoughts, not thought; Hopes, not hope- because dont want anyone to anyone shows that they can do better than the leader. because they need to demonstrate a feeling of authority. Overall impressions-A lot of grammatical errors-Use paragraphs to better carry out your argument-Need concrete examples //home/vdimitrov/5876/f1b2fb5dc62178d55fae667bf6762ed0aa43f5ee.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.
- Spring '11