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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1245 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __1__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 1.33 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Thesis is there, but no examples - Use examples from literature, history, or current events Organization: - No organization (introduction two body paragraphs conclusion) - Use paragraphs Use of sentences - A lot of fragments (ie: “Because the mistakes are hard for the author to find.”)
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Unformatted text preview: -Mainly simple sentences, try more complex sentences/combining sentences Choice of words -Dont use thing in essays-No contractions in essays Grammar & Usage-Many errors in subject-verb agreement and sentence structure //home/vdimitrov/5876/f1b2fb5dc62178d55fae667bf6762ed0aa43f5ee.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Thoughts, not thought; Hopes, not hope- because dont want anyone to anyone shows that they can do better than the leader. because they need to demonstrate a feeling of authority. Overall impressions-A lot of grammatical errors-Use paragraphs to better carry out your argument-Need concrete examples //home/vdimitrov/5876/f1b2fb5dc62178d55fae667bf6762ed0aa43f5ee.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.

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