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1315.online7_TKedited - Organization: -Great overall...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1315 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __4__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __4___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 3.5 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Good, clear thesis - Solid examples, good at relating back to thesis!
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Unformatted text preview: Organization: -Great overall organization-Use transition before first body paragraph-Use a hook at beginning of introduction Use of sentences-Varied sentence structure Choice of words -Essay flows nicely, but could use more sophisticated vocabulary Grammar & Usage-Overall no errors in grammar, good job! Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5845/f14153061bccf874bf11799e2246a1305ab485d7.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Overall a strong essay and flows nicely! //home/vdimitrov/5845/f14153061bccf874bf11799e2246a1305ab485d7.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.

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