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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1353 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __1__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) V. Grammar & Usage : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 1.5 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Thesis works, but try not to start an essay with “I agree…” or “I disagree…” - Interpretation of prompt is incorrect, the prompt is talking about materialism - Cute example though! Organization: - Okay organization, has an idea of introduction, body paragraph, and conclusion
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Unformatted text preview: -Make sure you have two examples (introduction (hook, thesis) two body paragraphs conclusion) Use of sentences-Mostly simple sentences, try using compound sentences Choice of words -Language is okay, not too casual, but can use more sophisticated vocabulary Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5902/1849ac8fabb0737e7a5e99d5f48cef4a5d99ed4d.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-“I never swam in a swimming pool before.” “I have never swam in a swimming pool before.”-Spelling errors: “separated,” not “seperated” Overall impressions-Misinterpretation of prompt-Work on organization and stronger examples -Some spelling and grammatical errors //home/vdimitrov/5902/1849ac8fabb0737e7a5e99d5f48cef4a5d99ed4d.docx 6/10/11...
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