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1402.online7_TKedited - two body paragraphs...

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1402 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 2 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Good thesis - No concrete examples use examples from literature, history, or current events Organization: - Okay organization, has an idea of introduction, body paragraph, and conclusion - Make sure you have two examples (introduction (hook, thesis)
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Unformatted text preview: two body paragraphs conclusion)-Introduce two examples in introduction Use of sentences-Variety of sentences, good job Choice of words -Language is okay, not too casual, but can use more sophisticated vocabulary Grammar & Usage-Spelling errors: definitely, not definately" //home/vdimitrov/5861/442bd4f848ff84dd2f209d411ca2e7f228363dc6.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Could shorten some sentences: .definitely not a savage nor he was dirty. . definitely not a dirty savage. Overall impressions-Examples given were not strong enough-Work on organization and stronger examples -Few minor spelling and grammatical errors //home/vdimitrov/5861/442bd4f848ff84dd2f209d411ca2e7f228363dc6.docx 6/10/11...
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