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Unformatted text preview: -Good organization, make sure you have transitions Use of sentences-Try using compound sentences Choice of words -Could use more sophisticated vocabulary Grammar & Usage-Capitalize titles of books, names, and beginning of sentences-A lot of spelling errors: “realizes,” not “relizes,” “eventually,” not “eventualy" Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5932/7e4d8662912090595842cbff6f8fb7e240b70077.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Good examples, but the lack of a thesis in the introduction would better combine the two examples-Use transitions between body paragraphs-A lot of spelling and capitalization errors //home/vdimitrov/5932/7e4d8662912090595842cbff6f8fb7e240b70077.docx 6/10/11...
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- Spring '11
- Writing, overall impressions, Ivy Review, Mission Blvd.