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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1427 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __2___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __1___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __2__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 2.33 Comments: Purpose of essay: - No thesis—either state thesis and then give examples, or give examples then state thesis - Make sure you connect your examples back to your thesis (especially the first one) Organization:
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Unformatted text preview: -Good organization, make sure you have transitions Use of sentences-Try using compound sentences Choice of words -Could use more sophisticated vocabulary Grammar & Usage-Capitalize titles of books, names, and beginning of sentences-A lot of spelling errors: realizes, not relizes, eventually, not eventualy" Overall impressions //home/vdimitrov/5932/7e4d8662912090595842cbff6f8fb7e240b70077.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Good examples, but the lack of a thesis in the introduction would better combine the two examples-Use transitions between body paragraphs-A lot of spelling and capitalization errors //home/vdimitrov/5932/7e4d8662912090595842cbff6f8fb7e240b70077.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.

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