1480.bb1_TKedited - Organization: -Good organization-Use

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Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 WRITING (ESSAY) SCORE SHEET Student Name: 1480 Date: June 24, 2011 Grader’s Name: Tiffany I. Purpose of the Essay : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) II. Organization : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) III. Use of Sentences : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) IV. Choice of Words : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) : __3___ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) VI. Overall Impressions : __3__ (1 - 6; 1 is lowest, 6 is highest) TOTAL (Divide total score by six to obtain final essay score): 3 Comments: Purpose of essay: - Excellent thesis - Good first example, second body paragraph is okay, but make sure you elaborate more on only one example per body paragraph and connect it back to the thesis
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Unformatted text preview: Organization: -Good organization-Use transitions-Conclusion is cut off, probably ran out of time (recap thesis and two examples) Use of sentences-Good varied sentence structures Choice of words -Nice vocabulary, paper flows well Grammar & Usage-Great grammar! //home/vdimitrov/5892/52b8fe501f644366ab78d1d2abc43a4cda3685b4.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Overall impressions-Good thesis, but make sure you have only one example per body paragraphs to allow for a thorough analysis/connection to thesis-Make sure you finish your essay! //home/vdimitrov/5892/52b8fe501f644366ab78d1d2abc43a4cda3685b4.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.

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1480.bb1_TKedited - Organization: -Good organization-Use

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