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Unformatted text preview: Organization: -Good organization-Use transitions-Conclusion is cut off, probably ran out of time (recap thesis and two examples) Use of sentences-Good varied sentence structures Choice of words -Nice vocabulary, paper flows well Grammar & Usage-Great grammar! //home/vdimitrov/5892/52b8fe501f644366ab78d1d2abc43a4cda3685b4.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988 Overall impressions-Good thesis, but make sure you have only one example per body paragraphs to allow for a thorough analysis/connection to thesis-Make sure you finish your essay! //home/vdimitrov/5892/52b8fe501f644366ab78d1d2abc43a4cda3685b4.docx 6/10/11...
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- Spring '11
- Writing, Grammar & Usage, Ivy Review