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Unformatted text preview: -Good varied sentence structures-Some run-ons Choice of words -Could be more sophisticated Grammar & Usage //home/vdimitrov/5850/7baa0d665713947fc838facb441145d068fd6003.docx 6/10/11 Ivy Review 43625 Mission Blvd., Suite #207 Fremont, CA 94539 Tel: 1-888-777-1988-Make sure you use however when the two parts are opposite-Some awkward sentences: The conclusion, as I reached, and others came to as well, was that first impressions are too commonly affected by beliefs already engrained in as firm past experiences, however irrational to a keen observer. The conclusion that most people reached was that first impressions are often affected by engrained beliefs from past experiences. Overall impressions-Good thesis, but make sure you have concrete examples-Good grammar but some run-ons //home/vdimitrov/5850/7baa0d665713947fc838facb441145d068fd6003.docx 6/10/11...
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This note was uploaded on 07/19/2011 for the course ECON 102 taught by Professor Shah during the Spring '11 term at Thammasat University.
- Spring '11